问
...she discovered that Drouet had been there. His umbrella and light overcoat were gone. She thought she missed other things, but could not be sure. Everything had not been taken.
[原译]……她发现杜洛埃曾经来过。他的阳伞和薄大衣已经不见。她心里以为还少了别的东西,但是确不定。什么都没有拿去。(《嘉丽妹妹》,p.249)
我认为译文自相矛盾。请分析。
答
译文刚说完“她发现杜洛埃的伞和大衣不见了”,怎么又说:“什么都没有拿去”呢?显然,原译者是把部分否定看成是全部否定了。Everything had not been taken. 似应译为:“他并没有把所有的东西都拿走。”(参见 all...not)。